Noahs Eportfolio

Sunday, October 14, 2012


Personal Investigation Assessment Matrix
Expert
  • Shows weeks of work
  • Audience is very interested
  • I've done the work myself
  • Research in my words – with my personality in it
  • Contains humour(?)
  • Interaction with the audience
  • Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
  • PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or videos and plays automatically

Practitioner
  • Shows three or four weeks of work
  • Research is mostly in my own words
  • Information is interesting and in my own words
  • Adults have supported me without doing work for me
  • Some humour (?)
  • Some interaction with the audience
  • Audience is attentive and interested
  • Speech is clear
  • PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or video

Apprentice
  • Shows about a week’s work
  • A little research – some in my own words
  • Adults have done some of the work for me
  • No interaction with the audience
  • No humour
  • Poor presentation
  • Few pictures
  • Mostly reads the info from the PowerPoint / presentation

Novice
  • Reads the words on the presentation
  • Clearly started at the last minute
  • Hardly any info
  • Parents have done a lot of it for me
  • No pictures or steps
  • Research is straight off the internet
  • No humour
  • Not finished on time
  • Untidy presentation
  • Speech is not very clear

17 comments:

  1. Cool P.I Noah I like how you made it interesting next time you could have some infomation. Also your dad is a bit dumb for setting his leg on fire but awesome P.I

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  2. The was very interesting although I did not undersstand some of it. you did very well on the humor and i'm sure you will not burn your house down.
    From Saul

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  3. Nice PI Noah it was very entertaining and very cool next time you could have a bit more Info But other wise it was very interesting

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  4. I thought you were really brave to light yourself on fire even if it was only a little bit! Credit to your dad too! To be honest it wasn't that much of an 'investigation'. I also thought that you should have cropped the house fire to a shorter period of time because it was quite boring once it had been 30 secs. I think your filming light could have been better on one shot too. Otherwise ok. Nice one.

    Jaime, :)

    your PI was on a interesting topic.I liked how you put how to prevent fires.But you could have made the house fire video slightly shorter.

    Lauren :)

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  5. Cool PI Noah.
    That was really interesting when your dad lit his leg.
    Next time you don't need to put too much footage of Harry Potter and the house.
    Other that that cool PI.
    Salma.

    Great P.I Noah.
    It was interesting when your dad lit his leg on fire...
    Next time you could make the burning house part shorter.
    (Poor Harry)
    Oter than that...
    Awesome!! Luka.


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  6. Wickedley spectacular P.I. Noah!
    I liked your introduction with you talking from lots of different angles. Next time you could not be so shaky on the camera and not make the movie so much about the burning house. Other than that GREAT JOB! From Camryn mabey!

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  7. Great PI Noah! But what is the question for your PI? I am pretty sure Playing With Fire? is not meant to be in the form of a question.

    Josh

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  8. Like a bous Noah!
    I liked how you had some humour and how you had expression in your voice when you talked.
    Next time you could make that harry potter part shorter.
    Great work!

    Sammy

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  9. That was certainly very entertaining, Noah. I found it somewhat disjointed though - you had good elements, but didn't quite manage to tie them together. I loved your video effects and you did some really cool editing. Good job, Noah.

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  10. Well done Noah.You are a genious of think " Playing with fire" but still you should not play with fire that would be so silly.Good background on the movie and work on not overlapping your words on the video.

    ~India



    AWESOME PI Noah!!!!!
    I really liked that you said Harry Potter DIED!!! You should had made the buring house shorter though. I don't think you should "Play with Fire" by your self though. I'm not aloud to do magic with fire... :(

    ~SARAH ;)

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  11. Nice PI, I liked your topic and your examples but it got a bite boring and the end cause it was just that one scene. But I did like seeing things on fire. Nice PI Noah.
    (: Maddi :)

    Cool P.I Noah
    I like that you showed your Dad getting caught on fire bu t at the start it was a bit quiet and the burning of the house was long but I did like your P.I. From Anna

    Cool PI Noah.
    I really liked your topic but next time you could have that house fire bit really shorter cause that go really boring but other than that nice P.I

    {: Jas

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  12. Noah that was a pretty interesting P.I. but you could have made the house fire with harry potter a little shorter because it had taken up most the room and it didn't really look like a P.I. and you maybe could of had a little bit more info because I didn't really teach me anything like it was sapostd to and I like how you put the 10 simple things to help provent a fire and how you put everything on fire.

    By Nakeita Jamieson

    Great pi noah you did some great filming but the house fire was way to long but otherwise great pi.

    Cindy

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  13. Wow Noah that was very entertaining and funny.
    But next time you could make the end part shorter.

    Great PI Noah

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  14. Once again you succeed to empress me! Your P.I was humorous it had some steps. Everyone could see that you put alot of time and effort into your P.I. But maybe next time you could probably use a camera stand because the camera was quite shaky. But other than that awesome work noah!

    From Ben

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  15. great P.I noah i loved when your dad lit his leg on fire
    but next time you could try to get the camra more stable other than that loved it



    By Campbell

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  16. Great PI noah that was very funny. But the house fire was way to long

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  17. Wow Noah FIRE was awesome the music was cool.
    But next time you could make the harry potter house clear because when is was on fire. GREAT WORK NOAH

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