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Wednesday, June 20, 2012

production

"Must be strong"the words ring around the theatre as we boys lifted our arms in unison while the girls waved their fans around. All the fun waiting around for this ;the getting nervous right before our dance and then just floating away as the music starts. Now the challenge of keeping in the time and not mucking up. I just need to keep synchronise with the music.NOOO!!!! there is pounding in my head I'm getting carried away. That was close I nearly muck up like Tom opposite me I almost go with him. I dont do anything bad after that but it is hard to not rush off the stage as we finish.

5 comments:

  1. I like how you wrote your own story and thoughts. Next time you could put correct punctuation.

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  2. Great work!!!!
    Next time you could do better punctuation.
    I liked how you had heaps of humor.
    AAAWWWEEESSSOOOMMMEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

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  3. Cool production writing Noah keep up the good work

    Jo Jo

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  4. Yes, It was difficult to not rush off stage. Lots of voice; that's what I want to see. Great use of words.

    Josh

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  5. I agree - great voice in your writing. Strong start too. I also agree with the people who mentioned your punctuation. You need to check EVERY time you publish.

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