My Fishing Story

My Reflection

On Monday the 3rd of may the Minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experience. We are learning to be interesting writers by using lots of adjectives and deatiles. We have learnt toget straight into the action.

I think my story is good because it has lots of similes

To improve my writing next time I will put more adjectives in it.