Noahs Eportfolio

Monday, May 31, 2010

CROSS COUNTRY

At the beginning of this term when we started our Cross Country Training I felt nervous because I was determined to win. Cross Country is finished, I feel happy because I won. I represented Kereruhouse in the cross country. We came 1st place. My goal at this years cross country was to come 1st. I came 1st in our school cross country. My biggest achievement in the cross country is that I won in the year 5 race when I am a year 4. My goal for Cross Country next year is to win by more..

Wednesday, May 26, 2010

My Fishing Story

My Reflection
On Monday the 3rd of may the Minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experience. We are learning to be interesting writers by using lots of adjectives and deatiles. We have learnt toget straight into the action.
I think my story is good because it has lots of similes
To improve my writing next time I will put more adjectives in it.